haidao 发表于 2006-7-15 23:19

徐州海盗刷街有感``请点评`~~

<div style="PADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><font size="5">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 我要刷街<br/></font>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; -----------------脚底下长轮子`环保型的<br/><br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;站在大街上`像磁铁一样`吸引着众多的目光<br/>目光杂乱`甚至还有凄凉~~~<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;什么年龄`不用去想`我们都有着美好的梦想<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;什么目光`丢在一旁`我们要去执着理想<br/>向着没有终点的前方```勇闯``<br/><br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;刷遍各个大街小巷`<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;吃遍各种美味的小烫<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;在这一刻不用走路就可欣赏<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp; 再也不用被那汽车的玻璃窗所抵挡<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp; 再也不用苦恼走路带给我的枯燥<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;风 ```变的再也没有了方向<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;太阳``变的不在焦黄<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;周围的吵杂声也仿佛有节奏一样`<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;轮子与地面演奏出美好的乐章<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我要滑的更快```我要滑的更快```<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我要用轮子飞翔```飞越地平线```在天空中`翱翔```<br/><br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我想让所有人和我一样<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;我们共同把这乐章演奏的更加响亮```<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;盖过世间一切的沧桑&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; <br/>&nbsp; &nbsp; <br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;海盗`<br/>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;06`05`16晚<br/></div>

haidao 发表于 2006-7-15 23:21

大家&nbsp; 点评

小棋 发表于 2006-7-16 17:51

不错不错

haidao 发表于 2006-7-17 23:16

什么时候&nbsp;&nbsp; 一起刷街啊

风雨兮兮 发表于 2006-8-4 21:22

<p>10.1&nbsp;&nbsp; 刷 宿迁&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 徐州的朋友们&nbsp; 要不要再刷过去一次啊!!</p><p></p><p>小王&nbsp; 我们淮安和徐州的66&nbsp; 碰碰头!!</p><p></p><p>哈哈!!</p>

海盗 发表于 2006-7-30 20:02

二子 发表于 2006-8-3 20:00

不错不错，味道好极了，很压韵，没有想到海盗还有这样的文采，笔锋不错，有没有抄袭的嫌疑呀！！！！

海盗 发表于 2006-8-5 09:26

<p></p><p>想去！！</p><p>多谢二哥　　　　嘿嘿！！</p><p>纯属真实感受！！！！！！！！！</p>

海盗 发表于 2006-8-5 09:36

<p>嘿嘿！！</p><p>现丑了</p>

风雨兮兮 发表于 2006-8-9 09:06

额..........
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